Dear Journal ...

When trying to think of inspiration for our piece and the style in which we wanted our narrative to say through our piece i remembered Glee. throughout the series they have a character, Sue Sylvester, write in her journal and you hear her thoughts as she is writing it. Here a copy of some of her entries:

(http://cliqueclack.com/tv/2009/10/08/the-unpublished-journal-of-sue-sylvester/)

When Hannah and I read over some of here entries, it inspired us into how we wanted our. We, like Sue's, wanted our entries made up of very short sentences. This is so that they don't go into to much entail but get across what they mean, straight away. we also decided that we would have the narration speak as if she was speak in the past and writing her journal about what had happened, rather then as if she was speaking in the present. We also had a look at Clips from Danny Boyles film, 127 Hours.

This was inpirering as he used a camera to document his days stuck in the cannon. I found it helpful to watch as this was the sort of style that i pictured out narrative to be. Talking about the past.